No , this is surely not going in any PS statement .This truly deserved a post .
Read slowly , in shayrana andaaz to get the real essence .
In the original script ,
Arz kiya hai…………
जितनी ख्वाइश थी तुम्हे पाने की
उतनीही कोशिश की तुम्हे भुलाने की
गर किस्मत भी करे शाजिश , दोबारा हमे मिलाने की
हम फिर ना करेंगे भूल, तुम्हे चाहने की .......
हम फिर ना करेंगे भूल तुम्हे चाहने की
Ouch, its touchy .
And for the non-Hindi Devanagri junta.
Jitanee khwaish thi tumhey pane ki
Utanihi koshish ke tumhey bhulaney ki
Gar kismat bhee kare shajish , dobara humey milane ki
Phir na karaingey hum bhool ,tumhey chahney ki.....
Phir na karaingey hum bhool , tumhey chahney ki.
Though the first line is from a share ….came for review from Sh-pi. I want to thank her for the jugalbandi initiation and the kick –off word/line .Sh-pi , do add this to the previously suggested ones .
The first two lines were contouring through my viens(the second line was a crack). Many options were developed for the third line (few really harsh ones,
; not published ), But the moment fourth one was Hacked /cracked , Eureka !.
I jumped out of the bed at midnight and jolted it down on the nearest papyrus (foodworld bill) .Before it was forgotten in any thrill .
PS:For the convenience of our readers we have changed the blog template. The scrolling pain has been reduced for the long posts. Hence, If anybody has missed out on them coz of their length , can visit again.
PS1:Have I already recommended “what happens in Vegas” ?Ultimately hilarious flick.
PS2: Has anybody read “Lilacs bloom in my backyard”? How is it?
4 comments:
Arz kiya hai....
In najuk kadmo ko zameen pe mat rakhna....in nasheele aankho se meri rakh mat taknaa... hum toh tumhare kareeb hi hai...zara apni aankho ko palko se mila lena...
Shilpa....very nice sher...keep up the good work boss..:)and ya i hve seen the vegas movie but no clue abt the book...
hmmmm.....I have found another person who differs in Verbal & Written patterns, Nevermind :-)
BTW, are/have you falling/fallen in love :P ;-)
Agree with you that one must write any important thought immediately. I have lost a poem while coming back from Belgaum. Damn, the whole of it and no reference is left :-(
Now lets come to the post :-), Good Shayeri indeed, good job Sh..pa-Sh..pi :-).
PS: I don't know about @#% Vegas, but you surely missed C-Company :-)
@Anonymous :
1.unknown and cowardly anonymous comments are condemned here.
2. Put ur shayaries/poem or whatever on ur own blog.
3.Dont mess with me!
@Shilpi:Thx much da.I expected u to kwn about the book- it’s an Indian author Meenu Mehrotra.What for r u visitng the crossword sale then ? :P
@Abhi-W :1.That is for/from somebody who has “failed” not “fallen” in luv , dumbo.
And for the Zillionth time I am telling ->one doesn’t need to fail or fall in it , to compose so brilliantly.(it might help though)
It’s an art to play with words and may be I am just good at it :P
We suggest u to go through the post “Recipe for share o shayare” and also
Ishq gar shayaree ka raaz hota
To har dil shayar na hota?
Mohabat to sab kartey hain, Janab
Phankar kuch hee mein bastey hain.
U can find this in hindi in some post PS statement
2.Yes ,even I have lost many such .Lately I am trying to persist them.
3.Thanks 4 liking it.
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