How long has it been that you actually cried out LOUD.
Loud enough to pour out all that made your heart sink and feelings drown?
How long has it been that you actually laughed out LOUD.
Loud enough to pain your stomach and your breath loose its count?
How long?
All you do is shed a few drops and wipe it quickly to hide.
All you do is pose a “say cheese” smiles and again seamlessly hide.
Cry like a baby, laugh like a baby.
Not that there is no pain. There is ! , a lot of pain, no wonder we want it all out.
We have lost the art of laughing .We want to but cannot.
Not that there is no bliss. There is !, a lot of bliss, no wonder we want to express
Cry like a baby, laugh like a baby,
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PS1: Wow can this be a song? hmmmm it will be difficult to tune this. Each sentence is really long.
PS2: Rhythm comes easily while composing a song with shorter sentences and connecting words.
PS3: Let it be a poem. Leave it in its raw state.
PS4: This was my quickest creation: D
PS5: Yes there will be a post on my Dance classes .There is a
PS6: Good news- They have positioned me in the first row, Bad news- in the corner , beside a kid bohoooo.
PS6: Whatever is the case I am forgetting my steps.
PS7 : I have no clue or reason to justify the title.
8 comments:
I am hoping this isn't anything personal... Tell me, it isn't.
But, yes, you are right - one can so relate to what you have to say. I am sure it can still be composed into a song, if it already isn't one. Have you tried?
Don't despair on the position for your dance item - from experience we can tell you this: being in the first row means you are an awesome dancer; being in the corner just means you are much taller than others :).
We look forward to the other posts.
Actually we have forgotten everything that we used to do as a kid. The so called maturity has shadowed the innocent child inside. We do not express our feelings straight away, we more concentrate over the follow-ups/consequences, what others will think of us; and the kids do not care for anybody else thats the differnce :-).
As we grow up, we will be losing more and more to get/achieve materialistic targets and ultimately lose us. Everybody knows it, nobody tries to avoid it.
You are performing better with each post, or may be you started writing what I like to read :-). In the end, very nice post :-)
A request, can you remove this "word-verification", please :-)
We likes it. Neat. We observe a certain pattern in your posts. We hopes all is well.
@Yamini
U think i will be personal on a public blog..naah :)
Actually this composition shud be an add campaign for orkut’s new application – Emote emotions (Somebody please buy it )
Gone are the days when ppl express it on face and read it through eyes ……..it’s all on www through smilies .
-No singing ,No songing
-And reg dance number (the sports drill show) I am in the corner coz I am shortest.
@ Abhi-K Thanku..there u go more of senti .
Hey u have a an account na, so before commenting login and then comment, u shud not face the word verification issues
@TeofKap (till we decide a proper nick name for the enlightened one) – Oh finally I passed the neatness test, yipeeee.
U see a pattern? That is what u algo guys are good at- finding patterns out of nothing.
May be we are studying human psychology.
Hey shilpa...this is indeed a very nice poem and if u actually try u can compose it into a song...well i can help u with that..;)well keep up the good work and yeah you are actually getting better with every blog...WAY TO GO GAL!!
Done with the tune..
Plz come and collect!
@Shilpi thanku, yes apart from that Kirana shop , u can think of composing songs as an alternative job.
@DP Keep ur tune with urself :P
There is a pattern in ur blogs as others have also noticed...
nice one!! it leaves u puzzled for few moments just after reading it... but after sometime i could understand a bit of deeper meaning (if there was any :P)
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