You continue to chase..
for me it's a maze .
May be you love to hide,
or is it a game to thrive
or is it just a tide
hitting a stoned beach,
in a moony light.
You continue to chase..
for me it's a maze .
The day it seems everything is over
And thyself is prepared to be sober
Clues are dropped all over again
much stronger, driving me insane
You obnubilate stranger.
You continue to chase..
for me it's a maze
How long one shall wait?
The one who infers black n white ways,
to whom you talk only in shades of greys.
Leaving me amazed, now…..
I continue to chase
for u it's a maze.
PS0:Wanted to write something else,
PS1:Don’t know why it ended up like this.
PS2:It will not make any sense,
PS3:to those -it should not make any sense.
15 comments:
Wow! I actually like it. And if one is free to interpret, I guess we know in a way what this is all about.
hey GD...awesome gal!! very nice and well written..well my other comments i will take it up offline...;) :P
Looks like something is cooking...
E-One
Hmmmm...I like things I don't understand.....I liked it :-)
But why do I sense that there is some sadness somewhere...and you don't have to deny it :-)
Keep Smiling Gal :-)
@All:
OMIGOD!……..they are just a bunch of sentences ending with couple of rhyming words, placed strategically ……WAT O WAT u ppl are interpreting.
Is it forbidden to write this way ?...why is it if I write about it I have to be involved …..there is no denial nor there is any acceptance ….but every time I come up with such write-ups ..Junta becomes curious and jumps to conclusions.
May be I shunt have publicized the url so much ….i have lost in a way my freedom.
A Gulzar in making is being strangled ……sob sob . :P
BTW, thanks much for liking and appreciating it :D
abey oye gulzar ki chathi aulaad....ab baas kar bahut drama ho gaya....:P its our way of encouraging u....u see ;)hahahah...nahi re just kidding...we were just pulling ur leg dear. Once again well written!! Clap Clap!!
@MuneemJi:
Hum hi hum to kya hum hain
Tum hi tum to kya tum ho
Gulzar hi Gulzar to kya Gulzar hai.
.......Kash!
All i am here for .... so that everybody can pull...anything to increase my height.
Hehe :P Thanku ,Thanku..watch out for next few posts ..u will faint ..art will commit suicide ..others will surender
Lollz it didn't make an ounce of sense to me! :P
Now i need an interpreter to understand this!!! hopefully one of those who said that they did and could.. may help me out...
Oh by the way got a doubt - is this one specifically for "that" anonymous???
@rt g :
Hehehe... to most it dint made any sense …so how on earth will it make any sense to U?
>Oh by the way got a doubt - is this one specifically for "that" anonymous???
Ok this proves u haven’t understood a bit….Why the hell will I write about “that” unknown anonymous …I don’t give a damn!
..And sometimes even ppl u know can be complete strangers..…..i can imagine you fainting
hehehehe for that i definitely did! lolllz GOD shilpa, you actually said such stmt to me! my time to faint.....
@rt g :
Water sprinkled……, slap , slap …get up rt g !..u have to wake up for more such
After your previous post on heartbreak, I would like to know if it is intended for some other object or a person. Nice poetry! May be you can explain it in person to Art and please call me when you are doing that :D.
@Com: As said it may not make sense ..so it hasent.Oh no its not intended for anybody ....just few trial lines on poetry.
thx for liking it without understanding :)
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