Not without leaving a mark
They shine , they grow
Not without leaving a scar
They often come in couples
When the rosy cheeks are supple
They are coz of the heat
Or shall I say “I am hot”
Or is it those numerous pickles I bought
Sure to resemble a Dalmatian’s spot
They belong to the teens
Bothering me , howmuchever I clean
They pout , dwarfing my dimpleOh! those scorching little pimples
Oh! those bloody pimples.
PS0: I leave u all at the mercy of God ....
PS1: till the poet in me is tickled.
PS2:Still wondering who on earth can write a poem on pimples?
PS3: btw, I even named them once , they were the cutest twins.
PS4:Ok, if somebody feels like jumping off, i Stay @ 5th floor, u knw.. just in case :P
9 comments:
Hmmmmm...
nxt time garnier looks for some one to write a few rhyming lines i wld definitely suggest ur name....;)coz so far i dunno anyone who can write on pimples of all things......FAINT.......!! If u are falling short of topics to write poems on do letmme know i shall suggest something...bcoz i am scared wht u might end up writing in ur nxt poem....lollllzz
hey! this made more sense ra! really appreciate such admiration for the facts of life... ;)
I second rt g :-)
I liked the poem a lot.. Keep rocking Shilpa :-)
@MiniY: Ahem!
am I free to interpret “hmmmm”???
@DQ: Since u have already Fainted …..some more shouldn’t bother….. I wrote on my Dining Table once, dint persist it ….
After this …..shall I expect u to visit home soon……as I stay on topfloor :D…
@rt g: Hurray! I knew u might ...i have just given words to what we all have gone through ..to some , it still bothers .
@Wiki: we rock baby ! Thanku Thanku ..watch out for more
My Answers to the Puzzles:
Line[1-2]: Is it Injection ?? Leaves a mark afterall.
Line[3-4]: 'Lightning' approaching Earth?? Shining, growing in size as approaching and do leave scars.
Line[5-6]: Your friend kissing her/his groom/bride ??
Line[8-10]: Surely a 'Billy'(Male Goat) having Dalmatian’s spot on its body ?? It is being converted to Mutton with Pickles you bought in the Oven's Heat.
Line[11-15]: You in front of your dressing table looking at your teen Pimples ?? No matter what you apply to get rid of them, they come back hard.
Are you in your conscious, Are you alive at all ;)
@Abhi-W: well after reading ur take certainly Not.
Here we see the transformation of poetry to riddle.
But then isn’t poetry in itself a puzzle?
If you did not give me a clue about the subject yesterday, I would have definitely kicked you. Next time even if you write something about a person, I will take it to be written for some object. But a poem on pimples!!! The heights of craziness.
If I keep all this aside, your poem is very good. My whole family enjoyed it ;). Good job!
@Com : Oh boy!, u tortured ur family as well.....Well i knw from next time i am not invited at home sad....
Hee hee if u take it as PJ u must have enjoyed and u did :)
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